I feel the pain of loss
The pain of my losses
My losses exceed my gains
They tear at my mind
And torture my thoughts
My thoughts filled with dread
My thoughts on paper
As they spew from my mind
My thoughts of pain and dread.
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Anonymous • Apr 1, 2024 at 6:37 pm
Wow, you can feel the emotion from the words here. What an incredible talent, please continue to share your art with the world.
Tina • Apr 1, 2024 at 10:09 am
This was written with such a depth of emotion. It’s good too see a young person’s ability to put such feeling into writing. Well done.
Anonymous • Apr 1, 2024 at 6:37 pm
Wow, you can feel the emotion from the words here. What an incredible talent, please continue to share your art with the world.
Tina • Apr 1, 2024 at 10:09 am
This was written with such a depth of emotion. It’s good too see a young person’s ability to put such feeling into writing. Well done.